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Hand painted environment stuff WIP

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DeathMark1 polycounter lvl 5
hay Poly-count pple
 this first time to post here so i hope u like what i will do
my target to make a stylized room from various concepts and styles to one style that i defined it here on this model
work still in progress.
goals:
1-finish the room in 45 day
2-post every weekend my progress
3-poly target 15K poly
4- improve my hand painted (actually it my first time xd )

feel free to follow my on artstation to get progress
https://www.artstation.com/hosammagdy
 also i have one request please gimme me ur feed back as u can and tell me my mistake i make this thread not to show off it just to improve myself so ur critique is so important to me 
Thank you

Update NO.1
project progress link
mode

https://www.artstation.com/artwork/JNKQv




Update NO.2
model

Update NO.3
i made a tileable brick maybe i will use it for the walls texture this one i use the PBR flow and here is the textures


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  • LokiDokie
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    LokiDokie polycounter lvl 7
    Your hand painted stuff is really good :) it looks awesome.
    I'd maybe add some highlights to the rocks a bit more just to help edges stand out. Maybe a bit more colour variation in the wood. 
    I think your plant could do with a bit more work for me some of the leafs aren't smoothed properly.
    The other thing I would say is nothing stands out and draws your eye in maybe making the stone a more bluey tone will help make it stand out from the wood more. 
    These would just be some things I would do, the style you were going for might be completely different. 
    Certainly your texture work is really. Good :) 
  • DeathMark1
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    DeathMark1 polycounter lvl 5
    LokiDokie said:
    Your hand painted stuff is really good :) it looks awesome.
    I'd maybe add some highlights to the rocks a bit more just to help edges stand out. Maybe a bit more colour variation in the wood. 
    I think your plant could do with a bit more work for me some of the leafs aren't smoothed properly.
    The other thing I would say is nothing stands out and draws your eye in maybe making the stone a more bluey tone will help make it stand out from the wood more. 
    These would just be some things I would do, the style you were going for might be completely different. 
    Certainly your texture work is really. Good :) 

    thank for the tips i will try to use it and make the texture again and make them in my mind for next model :)
  • DeathMark1
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    DeathMark1 polycounter lvl 5
    Update NO.3
    i made a tileable brick maybe i will use it for the walls texture this one i use the PBR flow and here is the textures
    model

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