Giant Bat Creature

Zhaku

Hey guys! first post here. i wish i would have discovered this site sooner! it seems like a fantastic place to get advice on 3D creation.

I recently tried to complete my first 3D project from Concept to animation, just to get an idea of the workflow. I really enjoyed making this a lot.

I would love to hear your feedback on it as i'm currently in the process of starting a new creature model.

URL of the presentation can be found here: https://www.artstation.com/artwork/qk85a

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Thank you for your time in advance guys!

HarlequinWerewolf

He looks really cool, I'll need to check him out properly when I'm on a pc.  My only criticism with the animation is that I would love to see a little more delay in the tail as it swings down before it swings back up. Otherwise it looks really cool

Zhaku

LeahM said:

He looks really cool, I'll need to check him out properly when I'm on a pc.  My only criticism with the animation is that I would love to see a little more delay in the tail as it swings down before it swings back up. Otherwise it looks really cool

Thank you so much for your feedback!

indeed i did have some issues trying to figure out the correct amount of follow-through on the tail :P I will be sure to try and improve this aspect. one thing i also considered was to make the end of the tail feel heavier... like its a threatening weapon.. but when i tried to animate it in this way i could never nail it!

Thank you also for your kind comments