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Updated_Sod huts village, I would love a critique :)

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Hello all!

In need of a fresh pair of eyes for this new piece :)
This would be the hero's childhood village, with houses, chief's hut, potion store and blacksmith.
Any and all feedback is very welcome :)



Some dev sketches and 3 shy thumbnails :)

Cheers!

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  • EVF
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  • lotet
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    lotet hero character
    Looking good, I would maybe try pushing the lighting a bit more. its looking a bit overcast, which is fine if its intentional.

    If it isn't, I think you can make the whole thing a bit happier with a more sunny mood with more direct lighting with some harder cast shadows.
    if you want to pull focus with the light like you have now, Id suggest using the cast shadows of clouds to create and push back points of interest.
  • EVF
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    @lotet hey man :) yes I was trying to bring focus to certain spot through lighting, but your cloud cast shadow idea is just what I need to make it better!
    Thanks again! 
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