[WIP] Necromancer. Sculpt

Yulia

Hey all! I am currently sculpting a dude to dress him up later on) Some critisism on anatomy is very much appreciated! I am still striving to make him handsome, ya know, elvish kind of handsome (slim and underfed). Any suggestions?)

carvuliero

Right now he is in risk of gender ambiguity , give him wider nose , definitely wider jaw and taller chin other then that most planes looks correct maybe just push a bit lateral eye corner 
Can you post one side view without hair ?

kanga

Yep the front view looks quite feminine. I am with carvuliero on the structure of the face. The onderlying structure is missing mass. Nice work though.
Cheerio

Yulia

Hi! thank you both for the reply! Here is the side view without hair:

And, just in case, top view:

Looking forward to hearing more!))

carvuliero

I suggest to give him a bit more face and move ear back behind mid line 

Yulia

carvuliero, thank you very much for taking time to help and even do a paintover. It is really very valuable.

carvuliero

You are most welcome

Yulia

ok, here is a full body update (perspective off)!  I would like to hear what's our oppinion on it!))

carvuliero

Are you going for skinny or skinny with muscle or any other body type 
Proportions are ok , gesture too , calves are wider then his thighs so something have to be done about that , arm in side view could move a bit foreword , hand looks too short  , in side view rib cage/ scapula volume planes need some adjustments (check attached)
Over all is a good big volume block out , now just have to define secondary shapes and if going for skinny bony landmarks 

Yulia

Thank you! Yes, whanted thin, but with muscles, almost dried up kind of look... I used this dude as a reference. I wish I had a 3d model with similar constitution, unfortunately I did not find it(


And more definition on torso here:

Yulia

Hey, an update! Guys, what I'd be really grateful for some useful tips on making these mesh hair look better)) Right now I made them like so (just so you know, i will paint the sсulp grey so it won't come through all that strongly and bald part of the head will be covered by braids):