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2017 demo reel, critiques please

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snickerwicket polycounter lvl 4
hey guys, here's my animation demo reel with stuff from my last college projects. Thoughts?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bPSh9TRtJmg

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  • Arturow
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    Hello snickerwicket,

    Good stuff in it! if you want feedback on specific frames it would be cool you upload it to https://syncsketch.com/ it's way easier there instead of saying "around second 40". and we can draw on it!.

    - I would place a plane in every animation since its kind of difficult to see when a foot is planted, it's just a visual help :).
    - A lot of people say to separate the animation reel from the rigging reel but I don't know your story maybe you are just a graduating student and some people just want someone who can animate and rig in a project ( so, I am not the one to answer this haha )
    - The first idle its good! maybe a little more movement to the sides when he looks around and it seems that he is a little bit off balance to the front.
    - The walk doesn't move to the sides to maintain the weight of his body to sell that long stride.
    - Same with the run,(it's less movement in a run but there is still something) and it seems to have a pop while the leg is coming forward.
    - The next ones are good!
    - For the robot running I think is too much that the leg is coming up
    - For the girl just watch the IK extension of the legs

    Good job!
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