Critique. Traditional Japanese Scene.

Modesto3D · Jul 2017

Wanted to know your thoughts on how far I've come along on this project. The old shots are what I was able to do my Senior year at SCAD
, and the new ones are the progress from the month following that.
Full project on Artstation https://www.artstation.com/artwork/52Zwz
These are the new shots

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And these are the old shots.

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Full project on Artstation https://www.artstation.com/artwork/52Zwz
Let me know what you think!

Toafaloaf · Jul 2017

This is beautiful. I love the trees. Awsome lighting and shadows. My thought would be the maybe have some blue as a complimentary color to all that orange. Maybe more distance out the door would give it more depth. Maybe if the sky was a bit more blue. The rugs look almost too perfect. Maybe if there was subtle variation. It's amazing though, just being picky to help.

Modesto3D · Jul 2017

Thank you, I appreciate you taking the time to critique it Toafaloaf!
Made the shadows a bit blue but made it more subtle in the end, perhaps I could find some blue plants/flowers that are native to the region.

Ahh you just reminded me I really need to pick up grunge mask for variation, the wicker tatami mats are looking very similar atm. (I think I only got away with the shoji screens because the lighting on them tbh). I think I'll take a few hours today to pick some out.

Once again, I really appreciate the feedback!

Critique. Traditional Japanese Scene.

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