(critique please) A few grenades

TannerMyers · Apr 2017

Hi! This is a project I have been working on for a bit. I am new to Substance and made these as sort of a test run. Any feedback will be MUCH appreciated. If you have any other questions or want to see any other angles or anything feel free to message me! Also this is my first time posting on here so if I did anything wrong please tell me.

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Not 100% sure what is going on with the pin in this one, any advice would be much appreciated.

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Any ideas on ways to spice up the wood would be much appreciated, it looks dull.

Ashervisalis · May 2017

Cool!

- The text seems warped. Are you projecting the writing directly onto the model? If so, try playing around with the Brush Alignment settings.
- The red colour of the grenade seems a bit Christmasy.
- An up-close render of the wood on the stick grenade would be nice!
- I'd play around with the roughness of the green material on the green grenade. I think it might be a bit too rough.

(critique please) A few grenades

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