Hi, I am starting a new thread today for my new project. Please don't restrain from any feedback. I have never made a full soldier type character, so here it come:
If you hadnt said she was female, I wouldnt have noticed. The upper body seems a bit too masculine. I think the cause is the shoulders, they are really broad and much wider than the hips. If you taper the shoulders in and widen the hips, I think it will help alot.
Its a great start and I look foraward to seeing it develop.
Her head seems too small, i think thats becuase her legs are too long. her arms are too long, and becuase they're too long, you also made them too thick
I doubled check my proportion and shortens the arm a bit, I'll update more of her body later. the clothing piece are all set up, rest all the stitching and a bit more refining on the details.
Hey, coming along nicely, especially the overall attire and accersories. I would second @oreoorbitz, and say that although you changed them, the shoulder now feel like they are too squared up, you might want to soften the shape just on the top of it.
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Its a great start and I look foraward to seeing it develop.
Day two(the part i didn't work on yet are hidden)
no update on her body yet, but I get the body armor to shape.
Day 3 :
I doubled check my proportion and shortens the arm a bit, I'll update more of her body later. the clothing piece are all set up, rest all the stitching and a bit more refining on the details.
Small day, just soften up the face and add skin details.
Some adjustment on the skin details, a bit of fibermesh, some stitch refinement, and new gloves.
Well done, though!
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