action anim, feedback need it

tiagosol

Hey guys,
I´ve been working in this animation and I would love to hear some feedback! always good to have some fresh eyes to see what can be improve
Cheers,

here is my synchsketch: https://syncsketch.com/sketch/142646#166551



here is my synchsketch: https://syncsketch.com/sketch/142646#166551

AnthonyAnimation

Hey @tiagosol, cool shot! If you could upload it to syncsketch it will be much easier to give detailed feedback.

AGoodFella

This looks great dude, only note is on f230, his hips are facing forward while his chest facing to the side. I would rotate his hips more so the rotations are spread more evenly thorough the spine.

Maybe drop his leg earlier on f26 so it happens before the hand drops as well.

On f135, maybe the ogre has a bit more bounce as he comes to a stop. He's big so maybe there is some bounce in his upper body as all that mass comes to a stop.

Looks awesome!

tiagosol

Thanks @AGoodFella! I did some modification on the story. Hopefully now reads better and looks more action driven.
Feedback always welcome