action anim, feedback need it

tiagosol · Mar 2017

Hey guys,
I´ve been working in this animation and I would love to hear some feedback! always good to have some fresh eyes to see what can be improve

Cheers,

here is my synchsketch: https://syncsketch.com/sketch/142646#166551

here is my synchsketch: https://syncsketch.com/sketch/142646#166551

AnthonyAnimation · Apr 2017

Hey @tiagosol, cool shot! If you could upload it to syncsketch it will be much easier to give detailed feedback.

AGoodFella · Apr 2017

This looks great dude, only note is on f230, his hips are facing forward while his chest facing to the side. I would rotate his hips more so the rotations are spread more evenly thorough the spine.

Maybe drop his leg earlier on f26 so it happens before the hand drops as well.

On f135, maybe the ogre has a bit more bounce as he comes to a stop. He's big so maybe there is some bounce in his upper body as all that mass comes to a stop.

Looks awesome!

tiagosol · Apr 2017

Thanks @AGoodFella! I did some modification on the story. Hopefully now reads better and looks more action driven.
Feedback always welcome

action anim, feedback need it

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