Concept Artist Portfolio Critique Request

MonkTiger

Hi folks! Looking for feed back on my portfolio.
www.junchoi.artstation.com

recently applied for a job for a concept art position and got rejected.
Trying to improve my art and plug in more pieces into my portfolio and I need your help!
Thanks!

lotet

well basically I think you need to clean up you rendering. everything right now is looking sketchy and unfinished, might scare of an employer.

MonkTiger

@lotet which one? all of them?

lotet

MonkTiger said:

@lotet which one? all of them?

pretty much yes. 

a good, but brutal thing, you can do is put your art up next to someone of similar style you admire. it usually becomes quite clear how close or far from professional level you are that way.

miguelnarayan

There's a lot of room for interpretation in your work, I suggest you get 'art of' books and see what people are presenting in their portfolios that get accepted.
I recommend The Skilful Huntsman and In the Future, both art books from Art Center entertainment design course.

skyline5gtr

As a modeler I suggest more views to model from. The perspective shots are limited and need more help with scale.

Front , Side , 2.5 view and reference scale