Final year work NEED THE FEEDBACKS!!! :D

jordan_spinks · Mar 2017

Hey guys I'm currently creating a environment for my final year project and I need some critique/feedback on how the level looks and how it can be improved. I'll be very grateful for any feedback I receive

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Jaggar · Mar 2017

You need more soft light because you can not see much. The floor seems to be too mirror. I would think about atmosferic fog maybe (or just test it) On the walls it would be nice to see a larger variety of roughness. In addition, it would be nice to think of a better composition when doing it

Final year work NEED THE FEEDBACKS!!! :D

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