Tactical flashlight - Critique please

ZombieDEV

Hi! Today i made a tactical flashlight to practice substance painter 2 ^^

Modeled in 3ds Max, bakes and texture in substance painter 2 and render in marmoset toolbag 3.

marmoset view in artstation: https://www.artstation.com/artwork/qP652
i hope you like!

mystichobo

Yo, while what I can see looks alright, it's very hard to tell, because your images are so dark. 


For the first image.

If they look okay on your monitor, I'd suggest calibrating it properly, and then retaking some brighter screenshots

ZombieDEV

mystichobo said:

Yo, while what I can see looks alright, it's very hard to tell, because your images are so dark. 


For the first image.

If they look okay on your monitor, I'd suggest calibrating it properly, and then retaking some brighter screenshots

Thanks dude! @mystichobo
And yess is to dark  
Now better?

noosence

Look fairly good material wise, although I would personally like to see some more wear possibly, to give it some life. Also is the front part (the light gray part) supposed to be so faceted? It seems a bit out of place, but if we could see your reference it would maybe be a bit easier to critique.

ZombieDEV

noosence said:

Look fairly good material wise, although I would personally like to see some more wear possibly, to give it some life. Also is the front part (the light gray part) supposed to be so faceted? It seems a bit out of place, but if we could see your reference it would maybe be a bit easier to critique.

Hi @noosence ! In this model I have not wanted to add much wear and tear because it is relatively "new"

And the reference I made a combination of 3 photos.

ZombieDEV

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