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Harry Potter/Radcliffe's Likeness Critique Request

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Hi everyone,

I'm working on a Harry Potter themed piece, and I'm trying to nail down Daniel Radcliffe's likeness.  Critiques and suggestions on the sculpt are highly appreciated.


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  • PyrZern
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    PyrZern polycounter lvl 12
    ... Don't use his 'half smiling face' as normal face ref.

    Here're more ref.



  • kawondavis
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    kawondavis polycounter lvl 6
  • xerpe
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    xerpe polycounter lvl 6
    Nose to Small needs a bit more of a tapered effect. Would also try to blend it in a little more. Lips are also to big, in correlation to the reference wold try to thin them down a bit and also aggain blend it in a little. I like to use layers for smaller tweaks like this. Would als o pull the cheeckbone a bit more to the Back and maybe get that dinkle in the nose from the sideview. Forehead also needs to be pulled just a tiny bit more to the front so you get that silouhet right.
    Hope it helps.   
  • travisdreams
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    travisdreams polycounter lvl 6
    The first thing i notice is the line/pinch along the contour of the lip. Almost looks like sculpted in lip liner. Smoothing the corner edges of the bottom lip could rid of this. The bridge of the nose is pretty sharp too. I'd Soften that to give it a more smoother transition rather than a harsh planar shift.

    Good progress so far, Keep at it!
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