Pinratest_Gun

DsculptStudio

Hi Guys.
Ours work are in the process of complete. 
Tile: Pinratest_01
Soft: Maya, Zbrush, Quixel, Shop.
Thanks and hope you like ít. 
 

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Tile: Pinratest_02

Daf57

Very nice! Looking forward to seeing it textured.

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Daf57 said:

Very nice! Looking forward to seeing it textured.

Thanks you. I will update progress.  

aaronmwolford

Liking the details you put into this. The only thing that seems off is the thread on the lock. Right now it looks like you've stacked a bunch of torus shapes on each other rather than making it actually thread. The video below shows a quick and easy way to model threads. Keep it up though the filigree on the 2nd once is really nice and not overly done. 

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UlTbMvqUIRU 

DsculptStudio

@ aaronmwolford: 
Here are pictures of the details. Maybe I should build helix would be more accurate.
I will note it. Thank you very much. 

dobrich

Hey mate, Did you sculpt that detail manually or used some alpha for imprints. And how do you choose between what is done in zbrush and what in nDo?

DsculptStudio

Hi Dobrich.

Actually you can make those details in nBecause but I want to express it in Zbrush. 

in Zb help me easier for the layout but the location, small loudness ... etc and I like to do it in Zb. 

dobrich

Thanks man, Look. Its coincidence that we are creating something similar at the same moment. So I seek help cuz Im gonna get a heart attack. Look at what I tried to do in nDo2, i made base shape in illustator and export to photoshop for nDo. Look at how flat is. I am desperate to find a way. I still didnt tried with zbrush, adding that detail but, how do I make it. do you have any suggestion with a worflow. I always looks that flat whatever I paint in nDo. 

DsculptStudio

dobrich oh, look it good.

I understand what you mean, maybe I'll come back tomorrow.

Now, I need to watch football match Germany vs France....
Now Vietnam is night 2h 

dobrich

Ok man, me too. We'll talk tomorrow . Cheers

DsculptStudio

@dobrich:

I understand you but unfortunately, I  speak English not well 

You can view tutorials on youtube. I think it will be good for you
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6QYY7n2O0hw
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=he68gpQ0M-g

DsculptStudio

Lowpoly 
Pinratest_01: 10376 Tris
Pinratest_02: 11786 Tris



Unwrap:

dobrich

Thank you very much for these tutorials. I unwrapped a model and did everything, its just that I dont know what is good and what isnt. Thanks

The Rizzler

Looking good, I love the engraving in the sculpt. The subtle detail is nice but I have my doubts about how visible it will be in the bake, are you planning a 4K texture?

@dobrich Post a thread! Best way to get guidance and feedback.  

DsculptStudio

dobrich said:

Thank you very much for these tutorials. I unwrapped a model and did everything, its just that I dont know what is good and what isnt. Thanks

I think two instructional videos that will be good for you. I also learned it from youtube.

The video tutorials or Artist are excellent 

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The Rizzler said:

Looking good, I love the engraving in the sculpt. The subtle detail is nice but I have my doubts about how visible it will be in the bake, are you planning a 4K texture?

@dobrich Post a thread! Best way to get guidance and feedback.  

oh yeah. I will bake normal, Ao, Cravity map... etc with text size 4k

DsculptStudio

Pinratest01
Continue with bake map 4k: Normal, Ao, Cravity & ID Materials. 

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BucketOfNuggets

You've got too much geo in the tube part and not in the handle. Also where those two bolts are and you have a cut away, they should just be baked in to the normal. No need to have it in the geo. Same goes for the thread.

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BucketOfNuggets said:

You've got too much geo in the tube part and not in the handle. Also where those two bolts are and you have a cut away, they should just be baked in to the normal. No need to have it in the geo. Same goes for the thread.

" You've got too much in the tube part geo and not in the handle. "

This information will be with hands held by I to less polygons|
" and not in the handle. "

This details the long, large and important to me for many more polygons.
" Also where those two bolts are and you have a cut away, they should just be baked in to the normal. No need to have it in the geo "
Sorry, vì EL speak not well, you can mark this information is only okay?

Thanks for Comment, but I will note it and draw lessons for next time. 

BucketOfNuggets

I am at my 9-5 so all I have is paint.

The green area has more polies than what is needed. What are the vertical loops adding? The cut away into the tube as well could just be baked in to the normal. You could keep it the amount of roundness that it is at the moment but the handle will need to be brought up.

The orange parts are parts you could just bake down and get rid of the geo all together. With the bolts/screws could you bake them down or at the very least get rid of a lot of the polys.

The red part obviously just needs more. See how at the bottom of the handle is jagged in the bake?

It is a a great looking model though, and I am keen to see it when you get it finished.

amirabd2130

nice highpoly model. looking forward to see this textured.

DsculptStudio

BucketOfNuggets said:

I am at my 9-5 so all I have is paint.

The green area has more polies than what is needed. What are the vertical loops adding? The cut away into the tube as well could just be baked in to the normal. You could keep it the amount of roundness that it is at the moment but the handle will need to be brought up.

The orange parts are parts you could just bake down and get rid of the geo all together. With the bolts/screws could you bake them down or at the very least get rid of a lot of the polys.

The red part obviously just needs more. See how at the bottom of the handle is jagged in the bake?

It is a a great looking model though, and I am keen to see it when you get it finished.

Hi BucketOfNuggets.
" The green area has more polies than what is needed. What are the vertical loops adding? The cut away into the tube as well could just be baked in to the normal. You could keep it the amount of roundness that it is at the moment but the handle will need to be brought up. "

Because it is too long, so I have to add the horizontal segment to ensure the normal bake as well as better shader. However I can also remove it completely after finishing painting texture, shader 

" The orange parts are parts you could just bake down and get rid of the geo all together. With the bolts/screws could you bake them down or at the very least get rid of a lot of the polys. "
Currently it is also emerging a bit and so I want this information to be separated it will look like and more realistic

" The red part obviously just needs more. See how at the bottom of the handle is jagged in the bake? "

I also calculate this information, as it is a bit of jagged wood like sometimes makes it more real and because the handle will be hidden away when people with guns

Thank you very much. Because the words enthusiastic comments.

I will pay attention to your words and comments will draw experience for all the following
P/s: Hope you understand me and Sorry, because I speak EL not well 

DsculptStudio

amirabd2130 said:

nice highpoly model. looking forward to see this textured.

Thanks you 

DsculptStudio

Hi Guys.

I continue to have free time at Studio and I used Quixel to make textures for Gun.
Hope you like it and Comment for me 

WIP 60%

DsculptStudio

I started to work for the material details and maybe I should give a Metal black is better. 
Wip with 70%

dobrich

Hello! How do you make wireframe visible in the last picture?

DsculptStudio

dobrich said:

Hello! How do you make wireframe visible in the last picture?

 You turn up "  layer UV " and load it 

dobrich

Thank you very much !

DsculptStudio

dobrich said:

Thank you very much !

oki man 

DsculptStudio

The job finished  90%

I will improve and show it when finished gun 2nd. 

gfelton

Awesome work on those textures, looks very very nice.

DsculptStudio

gfelton said:

Awesome work on those textures, looks very very nice.

Thanks you.

DsculptStudio

Pinratest01_Texture final.
I hope you will enjoy and comment so I can improve it. Thanks u very much.

The Rizzler

Great texturing, nice subtle details make it very realistic. 
I think what @BucketOfNuggets said earlier in the thread is still true - there isn't enough polys in the handle to fill out the shape, and you're getting jagged lines;
 
Which is a shame, because everything else is perfectly filled out with enough polys! 

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The Rizzler said:

Great texturing, nice subtle details make it very realistic. 
I think what @BucketOfNuggets said earlier in the thread is still true - there isn't enough polys in the handle to fill out the shape, and you're getting jagged lines;
 
Which is a shame, because everything else is perfectly filled out with enough polys! 

Thanks a lot The Rizzler and  @BucketOfNuggets 
sorry because i speak EL not well, so I did not fully understand what mean your comment.
Slightly less true that segment

should it need to be increased much further grid, so it would be better.

quocanh.info

look so good ! i can't wait more your artwork

DsculptStudio

quocanh.info said:

look so good ! i can't wait more your artwork

Thanks @quocanh.info ))

DsculptStudio

Hi guys.
Continues with free time at the Studio.
Pinratest02_Wip 50%

dobrich

Hey dude, How did you sculpt this detail in zbrush?  By hand or you used alphas. And how did you add it to your final picture above as a separate part? cheers

gametime

looks great. My only critique is to make the textures a bit crisper. They seem a bit poor in contrast & thus washed out. 

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dobrich said:

Hey dude, How did you sculpt this detail in zbrush?  By hand or you used alphas. And how did you add it to your final picture above as a separate part? cheers

I make Unwrap. Then using photoshop to make motifs, use it as an alpha and Sculpt detaild in zbrush.

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gametime said:

looks great. My only critique is to make the textures a bit crisper. They seem a bit poor in contrast & thus washed out. 

Thanks your comment. I will note, and make it look better. 

dobrich

Thanks man, could you suggest some tutorials about it?

DsculptStudio

dobrich said:

Thanks man, could you suggest some tutorials about it?

I think you can see here:
http://www.zbrushcentral.com/showthread.php?187997-Shendoo-Art&p=1154725&infinite=1#post1154725

dobrich

Woooow.. Thanks a LOT! 

dobrich

Actually thats what I am searching for like MONTH or so to make MY flintlock pistol but those decorations were a bit problematic.....And now that what you sent me, option like mask by intensity, to decor done one unwrapped part in photoshop. You are my hero!!! You saved me from heart attack.

DsculptStudio

dobrich said:

Actually thats what I am searching for like MONTH or so to make MY flintlock pistol but those decorations were a bit problematic.....And now that what you sent me, option like mask by intensity, to decor done one unwrapped part in photoshop. You are my hero!!! You saved me from heart attack.

oh. Thanks you.

I think you should be on the website for reference, on which there are many tutorials by other artists. They are really great and I learned a lot of knowledge there.
Ex: Pinterest.com, youtube, Zbrushcentral, and topics on this polycount..etc
Wish you success and wait for your artw work. 

dobrich

Thanks man. I will post it here for you to check it

JoseGR

Everything looks great! I would only suggest, like some people have already done, to add more geometry to the first gun
By the way, I was also about to ask you how you sculpted the details in Zbrush. Much appreciated!