Bad Ju Ju -Destiny Fan Art-

Cglewis

Hey guys...for while I had been putting this in my Mars station thread....but i figured it should have its own thread....so check it out
Was able to do some texture work on it
This is the low poly and it is kicking at 19,021 

The Rizzler

Nice, love Destiny's more outlandish guns but it looks a little flat, maybe your high poly needed softer edges or your roughness map needs more contrast? I think the leather straps need more improvement, sculpted wrinkles or a more interesting texture. It's good overall but I think you could do better, especially when this will probably be directly compared to the gun that inspires it. Keep it up

Cglewis

The Rizzler said:

Nice, love Destiny's more outlandish guns but it looks a little flat, maybe your high poly needed softer edges or your roughness map needs more contrast? I think the leather straps need more improvement, sculpted wrinkles or a more interesting texture. It's good overall but I think you could do better, especially when this will probably be directly compared to the gun that inspires it. Keep it up

Thanks man! Sorry it took so long to reply/act on the crit...you know how life can get anyway
I think this is the Final Version Check it out break downs included

Cglewis

https://www.bungie.net/en/Community/Detail?itemId=208875742

if you guys could like this and help it trend/get featured that would be awesome! Thanks guys!

Cglewis

Decided to retexture the gun, check it out

The Rizzler

Nice update, It's looking better and better! I think the bone could be a little whiter though, the yellow is throwing off the readability. I think you could also do with more contrast - higher difference in the roughness of the different parts of the gun, to add some visual difference. i.e. the bone should be very rough, the rubber parts (the grip?) quite rough and the metal parts glossy (with the wear exposing the very glossiest parts.) If those green triangles are stickers, you could chip away at the edges a bit. Same goes for the yellow triangle and circle at the bottom, not sure what those are just by looking at them. 

Cglewis

@TheRizzler Thanks man! I will definitely tweak these values and play with the coloration of the skull
I am unsure what the glow triangles are to be hones....
i think the  yellow dots and the white triangle right above the ejection chamber are painted on though. 

The Rizzler

I'd make the green bits emissive, but tastefully emissive. Would add even more visual interest

Cglewis

@theRizzler I need to figure out how to push that emissive in Toolbag....it never seems to come out like you think it would