Ever, Jane: Estate Garden Asset Crit for Portfolio
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Hi All! I'm in need of a harsh critique of this garden I put together for Ever, Jane. I'd like to improve it, but i'm not sure where the best places would be to put my effort. Thoughts?
My end goal is to share this work on my portfolio. I'm not sure how much I should polish things up vs what's put in game. What I should feature, and what I shouldn't. In the end I suppose its my work and I should make it look as good as possible.
The following images, the work I did: Formed a layout that matched a traditional symmetrical garden, created all of the assets in the garden including textures. Put the whole thing together in a scene in unity
<my favorite part.
As for my portfolio, i'm currently using artstation. And these are the only photos on there at the moment.
My end goal is to share this work on my portfolio. I'm not sure how much I should polish things up vs what's put in game. What I should feature, and what I shouldn't. In the end I suppose its my work and I should make it look as good as possible.
The following images, the work I did: Formed a layout that matched a traditional symmetrical garden, created all of the assets in the garden including textures. Put the whole thing together in a scene in unity
<my favorite part.As for my portfolio, i'm currently using artstation. And these are the only photos on there at the moment.
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It makes everything look flat and boring while this scene really has a lot of potentional.. atleast i like it!
I also would have played with the camera settings **kuch kuch** bloom **kuch kuch** and really bring out the spring / summer vibe in this scene
Maybe add some butterflies / bee's / birds!
Hopefully this helped