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Textured oil drums

JayS
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  • n4uj
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    n4uj polycounter lvl 5
    Hi Jays,
    Those grass clumps look much worse than the barrels, so I'd say that you can either get rid of them or imporve them. But definitelly not those.
    Some reasons why the grass clumps look bad: there are no negative space, there are no enough planes, the planes are not randomly placed, there are not enough clusters, the size of them is the same.... If you want to add a few grass geo you can always do so by adding just some blades around like the ones you can find here.
    The barrel looks much better than the grass :) so no worries xD I'd say that the normal map baking is suffering for lack of geo in the top and bottom edge of the barrel. While you have a fairly high polycount in the lids (which look very nice btw) the barrel silhouette looks very steped, you you canmore edges around. Now a days 18 sides is a good number for cylinders.
    Everything looks a bit too glossy in my eyes, specially the lids, almost watery. Try to add some roughness there.
    Red yellow and red.. thats THE SPANISHHH FALGGG trolololo xD

    I hope that helped :)

    n4uj
  • JayS
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    JayS polycounter lvl 8
    Hey n4uj Thanks for the critique, here is the updated version :)



    https://www.artstation.com/artwork/6w9zr


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