Japanese ghost girl

Miziful

this is my first post here, I was a little afraid of posting in this forum full of great people, but I think its time!

I will start with my last model, it was inspired in the japanese ghosts, I always loved them so I kind of wanted to make one, the creepier the better!:


also some more views:

what do you guys think? if its possible I'd also like to have a little bit of feedback or some tips, I'm still a student and I really want to improve.

regards

ArtisticTiger

Looks great, i like the facial expression a lot too. Sadly i don't have any tips/crits to give:P

slosh

This looks pretty damn good.  If I had any crits, the right hand anatomy looks a tad strange with the fingers looking a tad thin as well.  Also where the mouth opens up, I don't understand what's going on around it with her shirt.  Is it torn open?  The shirt tucks in above it which is strange...if it's torn, I would expect frayed edges and torn cloth surrounding the mouth.

Miziful

thank you all so much for the comments

slosh said:

This looks pretty damn good.  If I had any crits, the right hand anatomy looks a tad strange with the fingers looking a tad thin as well.  Also where the mouth opens up, I don't understand what's going on around it with her shirt.  Is it torn open?  The shirt tucks in above it which is strange...if it's torn, I would expect frayed edges and torn cloth surrounding the mouth.

if you mean the extended hand, I tried to make it look them like that but you're right, maybe I overextended a little bit.
also the shirt is not torn, she's just grabbing it, like for showing the mouth, but as I said maybe i've applied the idea wrong
what would've you done instead? everything can be applied for the next time

regards

kmacneil91

Really nice work! The hair is realistic as well as all the wrinkles in the shirt. I agree with the comments on the hands. I think the fingers are just a little long in comparison to the rest of the hand. Maybe just a little more texture to the skirt, to make it look more like cloth? But otherwise I like this a lot!