looks very nice, but the metals (exhaust etc) on the bike don't convince, something is not correct with the values
Its either too light or too dark gray depending on the material and either too glossy or too rough, if you want to emulate that photo of the spray coated metal then you need to darken it up and make it a lot rougher, you have some kind of in-between thing that seems not right and looks nearly like plastic
Something that caught my eye was the lack of detail in the very foreground on the concrete. I would add some settle cracks, grime and "pebbles". Not to much though. It's just very flat and even right now.
Thankyou very much for the feedback guys, I will look at all of it as soon as I can. I shall try and get a little more interest in the ground / decals dotted around and fix up some bike materials
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I'd say the floor looks a little too clean, especially in the top image.
It might be cool to vert paint in some more gloss variation or just a few very light decals
And also, I agree with the guy and his gif above me.
Ollitei, Kazperstan is a girl >.<
Its either too light or too dark gray depending on the material and either too glossy or too rough, if you want to emulate that photo of the spray coated metal then you need to darken it up and make it a lot rougher, you have some kind of in-between thing that seems not right and looks nearly like plastic
the leather sofa also seems very glossy
As a VFX artist would say... SITA pass... S**t in the air..
Something that caught my eye was the lack of detail in the very foreground on the concrete. I would add some settle cracks, grime and "pebbles". Not to much though. It's just very flat and even right now.
Keep it up!