2 characters I'm working on- Loki and Maya Fey

supremedalek925

I've been giving my hand at low poly hand painted characters lately. I feel like I'm improving more as I go at it. I did Loki first and I consider it pretty much finished for now and I'm working on higher level details on Maya.

TomGT

Some things I noticed on Maya Fey:

Her face and hair needs tweaking. First thing I noticed was her hair volume isn't quite right, it needs to be puffier I reckon. Her hair covers up a lot of her head size and it really defines Maya for me.

Eyes don't quite match Maya's eyes, refer to her concept art. As for lips, I guess this depends on the style you're after, but in the AA series her lips consist of a line and very subtle shading.

Her silhouette is working fine, with a bit of work this will look good!

Gonna put her concept art here for your reference.

supremedalek925

Good feedback on the hair. I started with more "anime" looking eyes but I thought they looked very strange so I went with more realistic eyes but I'd like to give it another try.

cgartland

Your textures are looking a bit flat. Try bumping up the contrast and adding a little bit complimentary color to your darkest areas.

Also faces, your faces seem a little dense for how low poly everything else is. Look up "planes of the face" and try to prioritize your polys to define those shapes.