tere's something wrong with the arms, they seem too short, also the right arm guard seem to be out of place with the shouder armor like that, too round, maye you have to set a style for the armor pieces, go for square or round shapes
Love the face and hair so far
Dantert makes a good point with the arm guard but I think it might just be placeholder till you get around to it?
Either way I really dig her...Great face and proportions......and the cloth and hair are cool too....basically all of this is RADS!
Another Riven! ^^ Great start man, that belt is bothering me though... looks as though it would fall right off her. I'm loving the proportions, face and hair though!
Amazing work, dat face :O Could I ask how much time you've spent until now?
I agree about the belt almost falling off. And maybe the colors could be a bit warmer/saturated.
Enalya: I don`t know exactly how much time I've spent, all I know is that I'm working every day on my free time.
About the colors, it is just a base painting, I'll change it on photoshop.
Damn man! First time seeing this...dig it! Skin is lookin gooooood. The eye could definitely pop more and the metal looks a tad off. Maybe give it a more apparent light source? Not sure...I'm sure this will be epic by the end!
Seriously love the face! Turned out awesome man. Small nitpick would be that I would have loved to see some color in the hair since it is the same value as the wraps and doesn't quite pop as nicely as I would want it to. In the end, an awesome piece overall though!
Slosh - I agree with you ! I should have added some contrast to her hair.. anyway, thank you so much for your comments, it helped a lot during the whole process
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This is my first wip !
hope u like it!
Love the face and hair so far
Dantert makes a good point with the arm guard but I think it might just be placeholder till you get around to it?
Either way I really dig her...Great face and proportions......and the cloth and hair are cool too....basically all of this is RADS!
...so keen for more.
Here is another wip!
Still a lot to do
Cloth and hair sculpt are awesome.
I'd consider maybe saturating the iris with a vibrant colour,
great work though dude.
I would exaggerate her waist and ankile to thin a bit
I agree about the belt almost falling off. And maybe the colors could be a bit warmer/saturated.
Enalya: I don`t know exactly how much time I've spent, all I know is that I'm working every day on my free time.
About the colors, it is just a base painting, I'll change it on photoshop.
And here is her sword
Ah! I've changed the belt btw, I'll show it soon.
Lowpoly progress! Hope u like it!
i think the eyes could stand out more though; great start on your textures man!
Still working on textures and pose! (isn't the final pose)
I hope you like the final result!
[sketchfab]64e4bfdca9584722b2b69ddaa512de0f[/sketchfab]
RIVEN_FINAL by ometto on Sketchfab
Slosh - I agree with you ! I should have added some contrast to her hair.. anyway, thank you so much for your comments, it helped a lot during the whole process