[Riot Art Contest] Elise

Betty S

Hello. I've picked Elise as my victim to draw a splash screen
Stage one - rough composition, gonna fix few things and draw clean lines next.

telthona

aww!!!

RachaelBriner

This looks great so far, I think your composition is working very well. Something that might add even more, just to consider, would be to add some spiders on the left large foreground web so that they lead the viewer in even more.

I know this is a rough composition, but what is her action? You might want to give her a more regal attitude. Just tilting the head up slightly, puffing the chest out more.

Looking good Love to see the final.