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hello guys,
im pretty new at this and i have started making a character in 3d max for a horror game, its a Japanese ghost that as u can see have some things going on in the face and the throat, all of her bone from the upper lip is exposed and her throat is torn, as u can see there is a tongue that is long and all out and a part of it is showing in the torn throat which im not sure if i should keep or remove.
this is one of my first character in 3d max and it does not look as i want it to, it does not look proper (also she is not spouse to be bold i did not add the hair yet).
Can you tell me how to improve it by adding/removing/changing parts of her? any ideas will be appreciated.
Also do you see any problems with the proportions of the character?
Thanks in advance.
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