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abandoned hospital scene

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  • Tectonic
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    Tectonic polycounter lvl 10
    yeah, that shows off your work much better. well done! :)
  • pat123d
    Hey guys, many thanks for supporting my work. Now I´d like to work on decals and textures and more grunge. Maybe I create some more assets. Update will follow soon.
  • alimux
    good job,but... I shall not come to consult here :)
  • pat123d
    I m back after a long time. Here I´d like to present the final scene from the abandoned Laboratory. Yes i think i call this final. Dont consult the doctor! Many thanks for support my work.
    Aniamtion is coming soon.




















  • ledyr
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    ledyr polycounter lvl 7
    assets look awesome, like 10/10 but when you put it all together it lost some of that great quality

    maybe the design of that room is not what i like (mood/ lighting?)

    another thing is what should i look at? Its like there are too many thing that want to have my attention, it hurts a little.
    for example i feel much more comfortable when i look at the image with chairs ( fourth image )
  • Joopson
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    Joopson quad damage
    Looks fantastic! My only critique is that the babies don't read as being suspended in formaldehyde. Not sure if it's unrealistic to make the water "foggy", but I imagine that would help the effect, and besides, would make them less bold, compositionally, and a little more subtle and creepy. And in the 10th shot down, I can't see the jar/liquid at all, so it would also remedy that, assuming you could get it looking right.

    Great work! Love the lighting.
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