What you guys think about this?

BunnyBird

I did today 3d model. Toke about 5hours to make...
8k polys
2x 2k maps (AO,N,D,G,S)
Image: (rendered in marmoset)
http://files.1337upload.net/screenshot011-b9f5ec.png
Currently i have 3d modeled about 4months...
Suggest a name to this model too

slosh

I'd say for only modeling 4 months, you're on the right track. Shaders look the best to me. The model is very simple and lacks design or interest and doesn't show a whole lot of functionality. The textures appear to just be slapped on and not really concentrated in areas that make sense. Again, for someone so new to modeling, it's a step in the right direction. It's no portfolio piece but you should be proud for having been doing this for such a short amount of time. Keep at it and you should be making folio worthy pieces soon. My advice is to select a prop that you have real world reference of and make that as close to the real thing as possible.

AviKohl3D

I like the feet but the rest of the geometry looks very basic. Also the final shader doesn't convincingly look like a metal surface (but the gloss seems ok in the smaller pics to the right).

This is still great work after a few months experience. Keep practicing!

BunnyBird

To be fair. I did that model less than 5 hours and 4 hours i made those legs
Thanks Slosh for giving tips btw...

RobeOmega

Ddo?

BunnyBird

Yea

cromadbomber

That is some good progress since your last model. Keep it up.

-Krešimir

BunnyBird

Hey guys i did some changes to textures and guns in top...

lotet

Pretty good! I think your biggest problem is that its a box on legs. No texture tweaking can change that. You def seems like you know what you are doing so my suggestion is make a new model find a concept you like and try modeling that! itit

Do something with a bit more advanced shapes and design. Push your limits!

BunnyBird

Well. Thanks for honesty. I wont doing that again it was just a practise job what have to be fixed to next models
Im gonna push my limits