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High poly M14

Hey guys, currently working on a M14, I am taking my time with this one, trying to get it good looking.

I am looking for comments and critics in order to improve it as I can and if I can.

Cheers :)

http://i.imgur.com/8AlFpFJ.png

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  • AsaNYC
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    AsaNYC polycounter lvl 15
    Looks neat so far.

    You might get some more feedback if you post some wires and reference for the particular version you're making.
  • coresplendor
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    coresplendor polycounter lvl 4
    Nice work so far, but a quick look at some references i spotted a few areas that could use some tweaking.

    1 - that line is too sharp
    2 - i think it's too thin
    3 - those shapes are a bit different compared to the reference

    (wireframe would be nice too)

    M14_03.png

    For the number 1 i did a quick paint over the reference with an example of a smooth topology for that part just in case if you were wondering how you could do it.

    01_topology.png

    For number 2

    M14_02.png


    Anyway, hope that helps a bit.
    Keep going! :thumbup:
  • MasseStartCorpo
    Thanks guys for the nice comments and usefull critics. I'll work on them. Now, if I were to show the topology you guys would yell at me seeing how bad the topology is x) I guess i'll upload some wireframe shot when I am done with the part I am making.
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