Wip of character (Would love some feedback)

Torsoaril

I would appreciate any feedback on a character I have been playing about with over the last day odd.

Cheers

Kdawg

I think he's super cute! I'm getting a tribesman/native feel from him.
What exactly were you going for concept wise, it might be easier to give feedback!

Torsoaril

Yeah that's what I was going for. He was just born from a random sketch I quite liked. A stylized warrior tribes man I know it's not much and I do normally like to have a small story before creating a character but I kind of jumped straight in. Is there anything from a technical point of view you can see. For example the balance between rest and detail in the figure or not an interesting enough silhouette?

Kdawg

I like his proportions. I think it might be more interesting if his shoulder pad was on the opposite shoulder from his shield.
His hair could be thicker, and vary in lengths.
His bicep/arms look a little blobby, you could work on them a bit, stylize them.
His chest armor is missing something. Are they wooden planks? If so they could vary in size/shape, to look more haphazard.
I like the spear design, although it looks a bit sci-fi-ish? Again, maybe make it look more thrown together.

But I really like it!

Torsoaril

Awesome ! thanks alot dude

Torsoaril

An update based on the feedback so far

Torsoaril

Latest texture update. The spear still needs done

pastelspirit

I like the style, very nice!

renisancex

Kool design ....would be great to see him moving

Torsoaril

Thank you

Suba

Really cool style, I like the shape of his blade and his disproportionned size.