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Western Revolver

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Hi there ! I just want to share with you a gun I just finished . Any crits or advice on how to improve the look are much appreciated :) .

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  • Grimm_Wrecking
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    I dig western weapons, and its a cool choice. Where its at now is a nice place, but it could be pushed to a better one.

    Is this supposed to be a first or 3rd person weapon?

    From a 1st person perspective, the geo is too chunky. The rounded back that rests against the cylinder uses far too few tri's. You can see the chunkiness of the geo through the lighting.

    Material wise. The metal needs some wear, and the handle needs some work. Its hard to tell if its supposed to be ivory or wood.

    Beyond that, unrealistically beefing it up (50% width) a little would go a long way. Just things like broadening the hammer and trigger guard/trigger area would help it read better.
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