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TheGinger
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TheGinger
Hello, finishing up a character project, would love some feedback so I can do better on my next one!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fMdMu4Qwv2Y&feature=youtu.be
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  • Dimfist
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    Dimfist polycounter lvl 8
    One thing I noticed is your material definition is a little lacking. I couldn't tell if it was cloth or not around the ankles. I assumed it was cloth because of the wrinkles. Maybe it needs more compression in the wrinkles?
    You have some really cool features but overall I feel like the hard edges are a little sloppy.
    This is just my opinion!
    Good work man :D
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  • AA3D
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    AA3D polycounter lvl 3
    mmm . i dont wanna be the bad news guy .but looks like you need to recheck his arm proportions . his forearm is a tad shorter than it should
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  • Marshkin
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    Marshkin polycounter lvl 9
    It's a good start. I agree with Dimfist, your materials could use more definition. Also, your model and background are both very desaturated, which makes it difficult to notice any real definition or form. On the very first turn around, it looks like there is some fog volume between your model and the viewer?
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