Kodak 35mm Camera W.I.P

SP3

Hey Guys, I've been lurking the forums for a while now and i finally feel like its time to start posting. This is a project I am working on this month as a project for my class, Its a Kodak 35mm Camera. For right now I have my high res done, please feel free to give me a critique or some advice. Thanks

luge

seems like on your main body piece, you have good edges, but on a lot of the smaller pieces, your edges get really tight. and i think they may not bake well

maverickhornet

It's looking great so far!

I agree with luge. You may want to look into making your edges a little wider.

DWalker

You might want to consider the WWII version; other than the color scheme, it's almost identical, with only an ID plate on the front or bottom for Army-issued units.




I think the OD color scheme will let it stand out from most other camera renders.

The case would be a nice addition if you have the time.

I think the notched ring on the front of the lens is too thin.

SP3

Hey guys sorry for not updating this post as i worked on the camera, but i was very busy working on, so i forgot about this post. but here is the final product, feedback and critiques are welcomed ,also feel free to ask me any question if you have any.
thanks

Gazu

I like it

VESIUS

Looks great, the only thing I see that can be changed are the knobs. One should be different than the other.

GrungyStudios

photo realistic nice job

DWalker

I believe your ID plaque is 180 degrees off - the reference photo has signal corps away from the lens, and Kodak next to it.

SP3

DWalker wrote: »

I believe your ID plaque is 180 degrees off - the reference photo has signal corps away from the lens, and Kodak next to it.

thanks, I'll fix that for when i start making my website.

KMiklas

Awesome! Seriously looks great.

Personally I would try to meet texture resolutions together, so the body wouldn't be that blurry compared to details. Also, the brass could be more reflective.

Another thing is normal map for scrathes/weathering - way too strong, makes it feel blobby. The paint itself is not that soft and thick, rather opposite.

Atokal

Awesome stuff, what is the red stuff around the lens, just curious.