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Off Road CAmper - WIP

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So first post under my new profile.
This little guy is based of a concept piece that was so graciously given to me over GDC by Pete.
Its a heavy duty Camper/SUV type truck.
This is my first serious attempt at a wheel based vehicle. It is also my first foray into marmoset.

Below is the original concept.
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  • owlfrog
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    owlfrog polycounter lvl 5
    I think this is a very good start! I would suggest adding more details to the roof, possibly refining where the satellite sits on the roof of the camper. One thing that I believe would make it easier to critique with is if you had completely mirrored the model like I assume you plan to. I think it just makes it easier to spot issues, but I think you have a really, really good start! Keep it up!
  • luge
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    luge polycounter lvl 4
    I like the start of it, definitely add some stuff to the top, maybe a short railing.
  • BlueTheTall
    Not dead yet, With the demand on my time from my day job I don't get much free time to work. Overall so far I have made the body a bit thinner. I have moved the windows from being modeled in to being Floaties given they don't add to the actual silhouette. Beginning to block in some shapes I like on the far side, getting good idea of what feels right for the vehicle. Unfortunately I haven't spent any more time in Marmoset.

    Sexy Tire
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    Wire
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    Trucks as of now
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    Wire
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