Home 3D Art Showcase & Critiques

Floating rocks udk

mallen
polycounter lvl 7
Offline / Send Message
mallen polycounter lvl 7
Hi polycounters, happy holidays!.

Long time observer here, first time posting my work.
Finally got a good time schedule to get some personal work done so I thought I'd post it to get some feedback. I plan on moving along to the next project, so I may or may not modify this one, but I definitely will keep notes. So any feedback is appreciated.

So just a quick rundown on the scene, nothing special really, floating island. Something quick and good practice to get small scene together. At first I thought about doing something like a sword in stone but I kind of modified that idea a bit.

ur7e.png

tfxo.png

ano8.png

dkal.png
floating%20island01.png

Replies

  • Stormfreek
    Hey man none of your embeds are working correctly, so I don't think many people have seen your work.

    Looking great so far! I would try to break up and make it more interesting by adding some particles, such as clouds. Currently it is looking quite flat but definitely looks promising! Keep up the work!
  • mallen
    Offline / Send Message
    mallen polycounter lvl 7
    thats weird, I'm not sure why the links aren't working. It's working for me. I'll try viewing it from another device. Also, how do I post images directly on the link, doesn't seem to work for me.
  • Stormfreek
    mallen wrote: »
    thats weird, I'm not sure why the links aren't working. It's working for me. I'll try viewing it from another device. Also, how do I post images directly on the link, doesn't seem to work for me.

    It works now dude!
  • mallen
    Offline / Send Message
    mallen polycounter lvl 7
    yeah finally, turns out I was using the wrong link, duh.
    So I guess you were of course joking about the particles, since it wasnt viewable at the time.
    But I wonder if I should add some actual clouds in the scene. Right now they're all just textures on the skydome
  • Stormfreek
    mallen wrote: »
    yeah finally, turns out I was using the wrong link, duh.
    So I guess you were of course joking about the particles, since it wasnt viewable at the time.
    But I wonder if I should add some actual clouds in the scene. Right now they're all just textures on the skydome

    Sorry to spam your thread but I wasn't being sarcastic, if you actually pressed the links that were in your OP you could see the pictures :) I would definitely add clouds to the scene, just to break the scene up!
  • DougClayton4231
    Offline / Send Message
    DougClayton4231 polycounter lvl 3
    Looking great! I'd love to see some breakdowns :)
  • supremedalek925
    Offline / Send Message
    supremedalek925 polycounter lvl 10
    I really like the colors you have going on in your scene. Pretty sweet. That's the kind of game world I would have loved to explore as a kid.
  • Add3r
    Offline / Send Message
    Add3r polycounter lvl 11
    Super solid, clean, straight to the point. Really nice portfolio piece as an asset show-off. Really like the rock work you have here. Nothing over the top, nothing noisy, just rawks. Nice stuff dude. No real critique here.
Sign In or Register to comment.