Air Grabber

EdGaray

Hi
This is the project I was working on since last month. It's the air grabber from Bioshock Infinite Burial at Sea I was trying to match the concept art (which I would like to post but I couldn't find the artist to give credit) but it turns out a bit different . Any critique or suggestion are welcome

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Shrike

Please use image upload services, like hostr or similar, there are tons and it just takes seconds

Can you post a reference ? The form looks kind of strange and out of proportions
What I can tell for sure is that your edges are razor sharp (because your highpoly is way too sharp, you need soft edges, even more soft than real life)
and that you lack edge wear in your textures in general. Edge wear is very important to seperate faces from another without making it look fake.

EdGaray

Sorry for that. This is the first time i posted here and i was wondering why i get the link instead of the preview of the actual picture.

For the record I do not own any right of the concept art or anything related to the Bioshock trademark.

EdGaray