FPS MP5 Model [TB2]

Javibcln

Hi polycount! I made this MP5 theese days, and I wanted to share it with you! Let me know how do you feel about it!

Low Poly:



Thanks for viewing!

dpadam450

While the texturing is good, the original high poly materials look more realistic to me. Also, the texture seems to have just a bit too much contrast with the white grunge spots being just a bit too white.

Dimfist

Low poly looks great. Definitely work on the spec some!

Javibcln

Thanks for the feedback guys! I worked on the spec and the diffuse a little bit, let me know if this is more what you meant:



It looks good to me now

Shrike

It looks nice, prefered the first version of the handguard tho, I think the only problem is the lighting, its very even and it just dosnt pop. Your highpoly has better contrast, just put a stronger light over it in addition id say

Edit: Its really hard to see your texture with the small image and current lighting

silkroadgame

Good looking!

Nam.Nguyen

Looking good !, but still a bit flat compared with the HP version, If the AO map didn't give you the high contrast look, you can try to paint it by hand

Kosai106

You need to loosen up your edges on the high-poly, as they will otherwise be completely invisible on the low-poly bake. (As you can see.)

Fatter edges on the high-poly gives you some very nice highlights on the low-poly, which might not be realistic, but it's still necessary to really sell your models to the viewer. If that makes sense.

DWalker

The wear looks too uniform; concentrate it on exposed areas (e.g corners) and areas that are handled frequently (e.g. safety & magazine release).

The rings for the sling seem far too bright - they are typically blackened. Unless you plan on adding a sling, I'd remove them entirely.

Javibcln

Thanks for that great feedback guys! I tried to make all that you said in this update, and I dont know if Im doing good, but it keeps looking better and better thanks to your critiques
This is the new version:







What is your oppinion now? Thanks again!

Yilativ

Wow, nice, now it looks better, I its a great work

dpadam450

To me the forward grip is too bumpy. http://www.a-human-right.com/smg/MP5.JPG

Are you using a gloss map? If so I would make that portion less contrast and more towards white. Looks like the specular exponent is just too high making the specular too tight.

dazzerfong

You have a bit of normal errors around the lower receiver, and the pistol grip looks a bit too thin. Other than that, think you nailed it!

Javibcln

I accidentally deleted all the project images on my portfolio and lost them while I was updating the images and video... Well there it is so that you can see it. I hope you like the presentation. Thanks again for all your help

[Deleted User]

Great work man i like the presentation and the final result