I liked the over-the-top-ness of the first version of your logo, but this is good too. The one thing I'd say is that the " n' " feels like it doesn't belong because the green is too bright and vivid compared to the blues and maroons in "Sticks" and "Dicks." Also, everything else in the logo is in perspective, but the " n' " is straight on, so it jumps out even more. That's not necessarily a problem, just saying.
Hi pableaux! I decided to tone the over-the-top-ness down just a bit to make it more readable. But I hope it's still just a bit too much I can see what you are saying about the "n" and I will consider it. I will just let this version sink in first! Thanks for the critique man!
So I got this urge to do a low-poly scene just like in the VG Remix comp a way back. This is a first draft. The idea is to have a small girl pick some flowers when the first autumn snow just has fallen, little does she know that she is being watched by a hungry wolf from atop the rocks.
Gonna work a lot on the composition in this one XD
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You work is really cool, btw.
Gonna work a lot on the composition in this one XD
I really look forward to see how the little diorama thing turns out!
I like the design of the girl
I love the way you grasped the shading and lightning in the illustrations, I'm still trying to improve those areas