Please! I need a Portpholio feedback :)

guenna

Hello! I´m Guenrij Silva... 35 years old self tought noob.
I never whent to a game art school or something like that... just when form a regular graphic designer to a 3D modeler (like 3 years ago) and the rest off the path self tough and taking online courses. Mostly I focused in Zbrush and organic modeling... but I discovered ( what a fool of me) that zbrush is just the 35% of being a good modelder, now Im try to shape up my hardsuface modeling ans polygon modeling. wel the rest is just bla bla bla.

Here is what I achieved so far http://ruskymachine.carbonmade.com/

Plz any constructive critique will be wellcome, and destructives too as long it have sence

tnx for your time and patience

Guenrij

guenna

LOL! come on guys?! no body whats to critic my stuff? It can´t be that bad? can it?! :poly122:

Lloydyy89

I think you've got some great sculpts on there!

guenna

Hey! tnx ... I feel much better now lol! :thumbup:

s6

My only piece of advice would be to limit the scope of the portfolio to your BEST work. I feel like you have a lot of awesome sculpts, and pretty sharp renders, But there are some pieces that hurt more than help and could be excluded completely.

I'd leave it up to you to decide which are your best works and which you want to present the most

Wonkey

I would include wireframes and texture sheets to help show you understand how to make sculpts game ready. Maybe get some of your models into one of the game engines.

guenna

Tnx for the feed back! @s620ex1 very much apreciate it!

AlexCatMasterSupreme

I would remove this
http://media.cmcdn.net/20730327/780x547.jpeg

rework the presentation on this http://media.cmcdn.net/16644129/780x1094.jpeg

and add wireframes and texture sheets from game art characters.

guenna

well as a 35 years old dog + living in a country that needs visa for the US, and here there is no Game Industry at all...lol! it leaves me in the position of a hobbiest. I see every day Kids between 18 and 24 making so good demn stuff so i can imagine that no one in his mind will be pick a 35 years how still need to learn a lot vs a 20´s kid who have 15 years more for improve. But it doesnt mean that i have to accept to be a mediocre profesional or stop trying to reach the same level of excelens as all you guys! that is why I´m asking the feedback. This is personal, No trying to get to UBISOFT or AE... this to proove my self i can make it just right as good as the best ones in the world ... hope so lol!

guenna

@AlexCatMasterSupreme thank very much for your help and time... you are right about it

AlexCatMasterSupreme

guenna wrote: »

@AlexCatMasterSupreme thank very much for your help and time... you are right about it

No problem.

guenna

@Wonkey tnx for the feedback! do you think that Marmoset renders will count as a in game engine render? or Unity and UDK will be best?

Wonkey

No, Marmoset should be fine, just didn't find it. I guess I should of said, more characters in a realtime environment.

Swizzle

You're going to need a lot more finished characters.

You should have larger images of full-body shots of characters instead of the small ones you have now.

The anatomy sculpts are not a bad idea, but you really need to look at references more; the skulls have all sorts of weird planes that simply don't exist on real skulls. In addition, the sculpt with the muscles and flesh thickness pegs has weird proportions.

guenna

@Swizzle That was a greath feed back .. tnx sir! and yes now that I saw the paint over it looks like a meme, lol! now i know what to pulish