Student - FYP 70's Gentlemens Club.

aston91

Hey everyone, This is my Final Year Project I have been working on this year for my dissertation. I would love some feedback on any errors you can see or anything that could improve my environment.

Thank you.

joe gracey

The first three images look the same but with different textures. If you could add some different props to each hallway and try and make them unique that would be better. Also, the wood texture on the walls and ceiling have different densities.

A lot of the text on the fourth image seems to be covered and you can't read what it says. I don't know if that was done on purpose, but maybe change it so you can read what it says.

On the eighth image the two signs are really hard to read. Maybe change the color of the font or somehow outline the words to make it more readable.

Overall, very good job! I can tell you put a lot of work into this.

Joltya

I feel like the rope bars are too small in the first few images. Compared to the size of the door, they look like they come up half-way between the knee and the hip.

aston91

Thanks for the feedback, I have added more meshes in to pack out the hallway and main room. put an emmisive map on those signs so its clear to see the text. Also added grit and slime on the floors to give it a bit off differation from the other sections of the club including drink spills and footprints. nearly complete just a little more tweaking needs to be done.