Female - Nude.

dr grim

Hey guys, long time no post.

I am doing this chick whom will end up being some DC Comics superheroine. It's most likely going to be Batgirl or Supergirl (I'm more inclined to do the former so far).

C&C Welcome.



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bigphun

Hey, seems like a solid start to me, I might slim down the shoulders, definitely bulk up the forearms a bit.

I think the nipple ought to be higher and point up. Also, that tendon thingy on the outside of the knee looks like it needs to be pushed back from the front.

Othewise impressed, great job.

dr grim

bigphun wrote: »

Hey, seems like a solid start to me, I might slim down the shoulders, definitely bulk up the forearms a bit.

I think the nipple ought to be higher and point up. Also, that tendon thingy on the outside of the knee looks like it needs to be pushed back from the front.

Othewise impressed, great job.

Hey, thx a lot for the feedback. I worked on the fixes...except for the knee...not sure what you mean. Could you please be more descriptive? :P

Tobbo

You know the 'tendon thingy' :P

I think Bigphun means the tendon just on the outside of the knee cap (side view)?

dr grim

Oooh, the knee thingus! Of course! :P I think I understand. Thx for the help Tobbo.

spiderDude

This is definitely a good start.
A couple critiques: from the front view shorten her shoulders a bit, not too much, from the side view you have 2 options: narrow out her shoulder a bit or have that volume pan out through her triceps.
Her breast are lacking the general shapes that makes breast recognizable. From the side view, there is generally 4 planes to the silhouette of a breast, here is a ref image that'll (NSFW)help. As far as nipple placement goes; If you look at the model top down and draw a line roughly 45 degrees from the center of the head, that is roughly where the nipple will lie.

Hope that helps, keep on sculpting!

dr grim

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BradMyers82

I think the shoulders still look a little thick from the front view, and there should be more separation in the lower part of the delt where it meets with the upper part of the tricep. This will round out the shoulder more.
Also, you have the lower bicep pinched with the upper forarm in the crease of her arm. There is actually separation there where the tendon connects, a lot of people miss this I notice.
From the side view the arms look really awkward. The bend in the elbow and the pointyness of the elbow itself looks off. Also, based on the front view, the arms could be thicker from the side, as well as the legs. I would also consider bringing her upper torso back slightly as she looks like she is leaning forward slightly.
This is really good though man, which is why I took the time to crit. Keep up the good work!

MercurialForge

Shoulders are also maybe a bit to high. If I remember correctly the clavicles should be about level when the shoulders are at rest. I feels like she's kind of shrugging at the moment.

dr grim

I am going through verifying your observations guys. I fixed the torso inclination (nice catch) and I am going through the shoulders now.

This is my main ref. I just bent the arms for the rigging, but I can always extend them back.

Anyways, thx to you all for your time.




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dr grim

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Still working on rib cage and back of arms. Fingers and hands tweaks pending. Water in eye, eyelashes, eyebrows too. Proper eyeball. Hair might be done in Max. Needs to be retopoed too.

dr grim

Update!

Currently working on fingers...

Thx to everybody for the feedback, btw. Sorry If I am not being very chatty, been busy.



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garriola83

very good anatomy overall, keep going

dr grim

Thx for your input, Garriola83

New topology + fixed a few things such as:

Olecranon position, fingers, armpits.

Time for high frequency details and a paintjob.





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dr grim

Face detailing almost there. Fixes here and there too. Body pores and detailing almost ready as well. Model (body only) currently sits at 28.1M which should be enough.



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DESMOND

Can't wait to see more and more!:thumbup:

DiegoTeran

i like it =] great stuff