Battleship DKM Bismarck - Critique wanted!

Galvanize

Hey Polycount Community!
This is my first post and i want to show you my first "bigger" 3d hp model in 3ds max. I hope you like it and can give some critiques and suggestions for what i can do better!












I really hope u like it

fab-camp

really looks nice, but its a little hard to see whats going on because of your images.
maybe you could do some more contrasty renders.
also I think you can go up higher with your imagessize (in pixels and jpeg-quality).

Galvanize

Thank you very much, fab-camp!
I sharpened the pictures and adjusted the contrast a little bit. It should be better now. 1920px x 1080px should be enough?

Critiques and Comments are very welcome!

fab-camp

are you going to texture that ship? I think if you would like to have it as a portfolio-piece for example it would really be worth the extra-work.
maybe also check out some other presentation-renders of highpoly-modelling here on polycount.
also could be helpfull to post some close-up wireframes, so people can tell more about your modelling techniques. like edgeflow and so on.

Galvanize

I'm not sure. Probably i should do this.

Yes, i still have to learn a lot of rendering. Thanks for the Tip.

You're right! Thats a good idea! I will post some wireframe pictures as soon as possible!

3D Squirrel

Stunning work. You should think about entering 3D Squirrel's latest 3D Modelling Challenge:

http://www.3dsquirrel.co.uk/forums/blog/1/entry-48-3d-squirrels-battleship-3d-modelling-challenge/