2D Wipeout Car, Typo & Can

Shrike

Hello Guys

Student from Germany here, from the Gamesacademy, im first
semester right now , and i would really like some feedback from
you guys with more experience


I did those 3 in the last, personal tho, not for any project




The Water is made with displacement maps, and many passes I combined
with layer masks in PS



Both renderings are made in C4D



I wanted to go for a punk-ish theme for the car, the team could have a name like "Bandits" or something
along these lines, I plan to add a corporate logo later. Made all in Photoshop.


I would really appreciate crits on those, especially the anti grav racer
which is inspired by wipeout, I dont really know what to do with the
background..

Greetings

Eric

Shrike

No one willing to give some crits to a student ? Come on guys

rexus

hey i like the renders something like that gears it self more to motion graphics you should animate/ lens flares are very frowned upon and cliche / and looking at the composition of the soda can tone down the background the focal point should be the the product you are selling the Photoshop concept is a bit dark considering that the light source appears to be coming from straight down noon light source