Hi, awesome works there Fomori. I'm really loving your works, there are some very unique characters you have.
This one looks great too, and the folds came out nicely.
I do have some crits though, if you don't mind. Maybe it's just the perspective, but I think the torso might be a tad bit too long or the legs are too short. You usually want the crotch to be positioned about halfway the height of the figure right? I think this one looks a bit low in position.
hey looks good. i like it. only a few things i noticed. never seen a jacket with just one button, ive seen 2 and up. might be wrong tho, also the pockets on the jacket seem a little high or the jacket seems a little long, but that space between the pocket and the bottom is huge, also his crotch area ( zipper ) very long, do you have your references by any chance?
Some suits do have one button, but it's less common. I might add another anyway just for the added detail, but still have the jacket done up with one. I'm going for a 50s/40s suit look, a lot of the looks they had back then were very loose and baggy. I think that's why the jacket seems long and the crotch low, but you're right about the pockets being a little bit too high.
You've refreshed my eyes and I will bring up the crotch a bit, possibly lower the pockets and add that second button.
Low poly pretty much done. Might reduce where it's a bit dense at the bottom of the pants where the folds are.
Currently standing at around 19k triangles.
Hi Fomori. I've been out of the character art game for a few months now, but your work is great really inspirational. I think I'll be picking up wacom pen again and get zbrushing. Great work keep it up!!
Hey man I got a small crit
I think that look a bit weird. It looks like he doesn't have a foot under his pants for that fold is way to big.
Other then that good work man
Hey man I got a small crit
I think that look a bit weird. It looks like he doesn't have a foot under his pants for that fold is way to big.
Other then that good work man
Very observant of you. But I think it's just a bit of an optical illusion from that angle. Have a look at the transparent trousers and you can see that the leg fits under fine.
Speedy sculpt I wanted to spend a little more time on.
Based on Ian Carmichael from Ealing Studios comedies. Not an exact likeness as I deviated a bit.
Man I love your thread! You characters have a really cool style and a very nice topology!
What do you use to get your renders? Is that marmorset or zbrush?
Man I love your thread! You characters have a really cool style and a very nice topology!
What do you use to get your renders? Is that marmorset or zbrush?
Thanks man! :poly121:
Yep pretty much everything in this thread has been rendered in Marmoset (version 1) for low poly and Zbrush for sculpts.
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This one looks great too, and the folds came out nicely.
I do have some crits though, if you don't mind. Maybe it's just the perspective, but I think the torso might be a tad bit too long or the legs are too short. You usually want the crotch to be positioned about halfway the height of the figure right? I think this one looks a bit low in position.
Cheers, can't wait to see more of this.
Some suits do have one button, but it's less common. I might add another anyway just for the added detail, but still have the jacket done up with one. I'm going for a 50s/40s suit look, a lot of the looks they had back then were very loose and baggy. I think that's why the jacket seems long and the crotch low, but you're right about the pockets being a little bit too high.
You've refreshed my eyes and I will bring up the crotch a bit, possibly lower the pockets and add that second button.
Some of the reference I had:
http://classiccinemaimages.com/wp-content/uploads/2011/03/Claude-Raines-Paul-Henreid-Ingrid-Bergman-Humphrey-Bogart.jpg
http://24.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m64ivqe7fs1r0b22lo1_1280.jpg
http://img0.etsystatic.com/001/0/6837361/il_fullxfull.390542736_jlba.jpg
EDIT: links instead of images
Mainly been working on the low poly but did a little poly painting (just the head) to start getting some colour on.
And just for fun some filtering:
Currently standing at around 19k triangles.
Based on:
http://i.imgur.com/q4MFwx4.jpg
Had to do a few tweaks and a bit of polypaint.
/move on
I think I'm ready to start the texturing.
I think I've captured his character with the pose.
I've learnt a lot and will definitely not be doing the hair in the same way again. Better next time.
In Marmoset.
I can see a clear skill progression going on in this thread can't wait to see what you make next!
I think that look a bit weird. It looks like he doesn't have a foot under his pants for that fold is way to big.
Other then that good work man
Very observant of you. But I think it's just a bit of an optical illusion from that angle. Have a look at the transparent trousers and you can see that the leg fits under fine.
True that.
But anyway this is great work, i really enjoy your thread.
Based on Gray Shuko concept.
More detail and a quick polypaint.
Based on Ian Carmichael from Ealing Studios comedies. Not an exact likeness as I deviated a bit.
Initial speed sculpt:
http://vimeo.com/117311256
What do you use to get your renders? Is that marmorset or zbrush?
Thanks man! :poly121:
Yep pretty much everything in this thread has been rendered in Marmoset (version 1) for low poly and Zbrush for sculpts.