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[WIP] Newbie piece - Steyr Aug

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  • joeriv
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    joeriv polycounter lvl 7
    Kind of hard to read with the white material.
    Maybe go a bit darker on the diffuse color.

    At first sight it seems like your LP isn't nicely matching up with the HP, for example the bottom of the handle at the front.
    The curve behind the mag would also benefit from like 1-2 segments more.

    Also the aliasing is really bad, especially when later on your doing presentation shots use this:
    http://leslievdb.com/grabviewport.htm
    You can enter a custom resolution + some AA.
  • hamzaaa
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    hamzaaa polycounter lvl 11
    @joeriv: Thanks for your comment mate! Sorry for the bad quality, I just took a quick screengrab with the windows snipping tool ^_^
    Just wanted to show my progress and a little impression of my normal map. I will try to provide a better preview next time with viewportgrab :)
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