[Portfolio] 3dcaspar / critique needed

3dcaspar

Hi everyone.
Finally my Bachelor Degree arrived and now i'm finished with school.
So in the last few weeks i set up a new portfolio page and invested some money into an own domain. I also remade every scene and now i could need some advice from you guys

Here's the page: http://3dcaspar.com

Critique on anything you want!

Do you think i'm ready for an internship within the games industry?
Or should i add more work to it?

Thanks a lot in advance!

SimonT

Cool work! The only thing i can say is, that it seems the text is more important the pictures because you placed it above them So the first thing i see after a blick on the big banner-buttons: text. But besides that: cool!

3dcaspar

Hey, thanks very much for the kind words
So do you mean i should change the layout so the text is beneath the pictures?

fabio brasilien

I would say that your name in the title and the environment artist has to much color and effects. Portfolio, Resume and Contact looks good. This is a tottaly personal opinion, but it got my attention and I didn´t like.
I don´t realy care for big text over your images, but "Postapocalyptiv MetroStation" looked some kind of weird language before I read.
The high poly Pickup has a nice image on that, but the two evironments are just a blurry image, I suggest get a nice shot from your scene and use as background. At the first moment I didn´t get any interest on click on them, but once I oppened I saw some great stuff.
I miss some wireframe and maybe some props breackdown, something like this:

You have great stuff there, your environment looks great and the textures are realy well done. I am not a environment guy, but I believe you are good for a internship.
The things I pointed maybe will help your stuff stand out a bit more.
I hope it helps.

nightfrontier

I think your images are too big. I have a large screen and run it at 1920x1080 resolution but your images are WAY bigger than my screen. It makes it really hard to take them in once you actually enlarge them. I would say resize them to something more manageable. Good stuff!

3dcaspar

@ fabio brasilien:
Thanks for your feedback! I've changed the background images of the thumbnails to something more clear now.

@ nightfrontier:
Yeah you're right ^^ i just changed the size to sth more suitable.
Thanks alot for the feedback!

Do you guys think the background images/ size of the images are better now?

http://3dcaspar.com

3dcaspar

So I did a new, less distracting logo and some minor changes.
Sorry for double posting but i'd like to bump this a bit.

http://3dcaspar.com

Please tell me what you think

alexes

Nice work. Car and environment. Would be nice to see it the vechicle textured.

richwderby

Some nice work but you really need to get rid the text blocking your images.

Just use your other images as seen below and simply put the name of the scene in the corner

Seaseme

Hi Caspar,


I dig your work. It's all looking very strong, that being said, your webpage took a REALLY long time to load all of the images. I mean like 2-3 minutes - It might just be my internet, but if other people say the same thing you might look at some different hosting.

3dcaspar

@alexes: Thanks a lot! Well, I think I'll keep it highpoly only.

@richwderby: Thank you also! What exactly do you mean? The "branding"-line at the bottom of each picture? Or do you mean the basic information on each scene which stand on top of each project page? Thanks again for the nice feedback!

@Saeseme: First of all thanks for the kind words! So I've got 1,6k and it loads instantly :S
Anyone else having a loaging issue? I for myself never had one (also no problems with mobile devices).

Seaseme

I'm not sure - you might just have them all cached which is making it appear to load instantly - but it may just be my connection. Definitely get some others to test.

3dcaspar

Yep i will. Definitely thanks for the hint! ;D