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Hey guys. This is the thread for feedback and critique of environment art. Everyone is welcome to post ideas but please refrain from posting outside work if you are not currently assigned to the group.

Have fun. :)

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  • raul
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    raul polycounter lvl 11
    i totally missed out on the memo....where do i sign up?
  • plyrs
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    Some of you in the chat have already seen this, but here we go. The premise is that there is a portal to hell in an old school. Since the image was taken I have remodeled the windows (so I can make them transparent and break the glass)

    Things to do: Ceiling, floor debris, grime decals, misc children's toys, candle flames

    school_gate_3.jpg
  • LRoy
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    LRoy polycounter lvl 10
    This is looking way more interesting. Maybe it'd be fun to put in some little things in the background like writing on the blackboard and some flash cards or something. Little innocent things would help offset the GIANT FLAMING DEMON SYMBOL in the middle.
  • aajohnny
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    aajohnny polycounter lvl 13
    I added the walls, probably gonna make a few more varients but yeah.

    Dungeon01.png
  • ayoub44
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    ayoub44 polycounter lvl 10
    @plyrs : great work ,i think your focal point is center but those 4 red words are a little distracting .. good job :D

    @aajohnny : look great , are using shaders for rendering this ? or just max render ?

    finish.jpg

    now move to an environment :D concept by loren broach
  • aajohnny
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    aajohnny polycounter lvl 13
    Thanks, Its in the Unreal Engine. Digging that hotdog machine thing haha.
  • myles
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    myles polycounter lvl 13
    plyrs : As I said to you on Skype, looking pretty sweet really, you already have good lighting and its telling a bit of a story, you could try and extend this a little with the childs writing on the board, along with maybe some childs toys spread around the room to try and increase that contrast between innocence and evil.

    aajohnny : Looks like a good start again, but lacks contrast and colour change which is really letting the pieces down I think.

    ayoub44 : Lie I said on Skype, fantastic start, but if you wan to take it further (and I think you should ) You should adding a bit more of a chasis and add some detail to those tracks. Are you texturing this?

    --

    Working on a little personal project for the past week or so, not had much time on it yet. I'm sure most of you have seen this guild wars 2 concept - http://dl.dropbox.com/u/6530525/GuildWars2.jpg

    I've still got to finish texturing the stones, and I'm going to be adding some colour variation in the material along with some decals to get rid of the repetitive features. Which lighting do you guys prefer?
    AncientsSceneWIP1.jpg
    AncientsSceneWIP2.jpg

    Oh and heres some shots of the assets, showing without photosource and with (note without photosource is too strong, this is so it shows through the photosource),

    http://dl.dropbox.com/u/6530525/AncientsScene_TexturePainting.jpg
    http://dl.dropbox.com/u/6530525/AncientsScene_TexturePhotos.jpg
  • ayoub44
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    Myles: this piece look awesome .. i prefer the first lighting . the details look great on it

    hope to see more about this soon :D
  • Tokoya
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    Tokoya polycounter lvl 7
    Myles I prefer the first lighting style too, awesome sculpting on those pieces!

    Ayoub This thing is great, are you going to make a low poly/texture?
  • Oniram
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    Oniram polycounter lvl 17
    @ayoub: looks really cool but maybe you could go in and put a little more love into the treads. also for the cloth sim, maybe holding the corners in place so it maintains somewhat a trapezoidal structure when it falls could help. overall tho looks pretty solid. :D

    here's what ive got. rifle finished. :D

    ShadowRun_Rifle_01.png

    ShadowRun_Rifle_02.png

    with a turntable.
    http://vimeo.com/24523883
  • plyrs
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    aajohnny - I've already seen images on skype with more of this done. Your materials look amazing, just keep up the work.

    ayoub44 - Your hotdog cart's cloth top looks like something threw a blanket over the top. The tops are more tailored. You can still cloth sim on something you model more of.

    http://www.acewelds.com/pics_misc/hot_dog_cart3.jpg
    http://obrag.org/wp-content/uploads/2010/02/hot-dog-cart.jpg

    myles - I don't know how strongly you want to follow that concept art, but the proportions of some of the circles is off. All of yours have the same (or very nearly) inner diameter, but the concept has a lot of variance.

    I prefer lighting 2, since it looks more like the concept and lighting 1 feels to dark to me.

    Oniram - That is one sweet looking rifle. I notice you have a few scratches, but they are very light.


    To all - More work coming on the demon school. Will post it soon, once I get a few more bits modeled.
  • Alberto Rdrgz
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    Myles that Piece is looking absolutely gorgeous!
  • plyrs
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    List of things done. Edited fire particles, added new posters and children's drawings, new windows, more grime. Need new ceiling, more floor debris and probably other stuff I can't remember right now.

    schoolgate_6.jpg
    school_gate_posters.jpg
  • igi
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    igi polycounter lvl 12
    hello people.I'm currently doing this sci-fi piece.It's still a wip but I would like to know how to improve it design-wise,thanks :
    2cfwchy.jpg
  • Tokoya
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    Tokoya polycounter lvl 7
    plyrs The crayon drawings are a really nice touch I like the direction you've gone

    igi Good design, I can't really think of how to improve it off the top of my head, I'm interested to see how you break it down in the low though
  • Sythen
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    Sythen polycounter lvl 10
    Igi: May I suggest either a panel with handles or a vent on the left and right sides of the indention?

    Silent Hill Environment:
    As a child, Silent Hill was always one of the prominent games that essentially both influenced my art style and my love of horror games. The environment itself below is only inspired by the games and is still in very early stages of development.

    I started off with a modular section of the levels environment. This boosts my workflow and my imagination for the better in terms of the development. The floor and walls have a vertex shader applied, meaning I can paint on different grunge darker silent hill style textures over the cleaner tiles.

    SH7.jpg
    SH8.jpg
    SH9.jpg

    Vertex Shader:
    SH4.jpg

    Fences (to be textured with an alpha map):
    SH6.jpg
    SH11.jpg

    As I said, this is a heavy work in progress, I'm going to begin by blocking out, and doing a very simple paint over of what I'd like to be in the scene.

    Let me know what you think!
    - Scott 'Sythen' Baker.

    *UPDATE*
    More screenshots:
    SH12.jpg
    SH13.jpg
  • Tokoya
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    Tokoya polycounter lvl 7
    Sythen I like where this is going, it has that really claustrophobic vibe going on just like Silent Hill. My only critique so far would be to add some specular around the base of the tiles to give them a little more definition and hopefully make them pop more,
    I remember in SH2-3 a lot of sections had a kind of wet look as if there was a fire that was recently put out there and the walls and floor are still a bit damp...
  • BadgerBaiter
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    I feel bad about not posting anything at all (ever on this site :/ )

    Here is a shot of my rubbish project I was working.

    test.jpg

    The lighting was a work in progress and I ran out of time texturing... in fact I really need to do some UV unwrapping and texture painting tutorials as it turns out they gave me a massive headache.

    Scene was a lot bigger... can post up some pics if you want to be tortured.
  • Tokoya
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    Tokoya polycounter lvl 7
    Hey Badger I'd like to see some more shots of this, what did you use to create/render? I'd also like to see it textured further and rendered out in UDK or something :3
  • Nemlet17
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    Hello everyone,

    Nice to see everyone's work coming along.

    At the moment I am faced with a problem. I am trying to create foliage but when I mask out things like grass, I get hard jagged edges in game and it ruins the mood. I was wondering if anyone knows why this might be? I have tried the alpha mask in both opacity and opacitymasked and all the blending modes but still come up with jagged edges at a distance or when moving. What's your process of doing things like this?
    questions.jpg
    My grass (left) next to udk grass (right). See how much smoother theirs is.
    questions_1.jpg
    Thank you!

    Zack Dembinski
  • Illusive
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    Illusive polycounter lvl 8
    can we see the texture and alpha you're using?
    also you could take a look at the udk material and see what they're doing different?
  • BadgerBaiter
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    Tokoya, I shall get some more pics up when I get back to my main PC.

    I would like to get it into UDK at some point so I can have a wander through it etc...
    However, right now, I spent quite a while doing that, I ended up getting irked when I couldn't figure out the textures :/
    I am going to give that scene a break for now and work on something else and go back to it when I have had a breather...
  • Nemlet17
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    Here's the texture Illusive:
    grass_blade_1.jpg
    grass_blade_1_alpha.jpg
    Edit:
    questions_material.jpg

    Zack Dembinski
  • Oniram
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    Oniram polycounter lvl 17
    well, plain and simple, your alpha has a hard edge. maybe soften it a bit in photoshop.
  • tristamus
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    tristamus polycounter lvl 9
    Oniram wrote: »
    well, plain and simple, your alpha has a hard edge. maybe soften it a bit in photoshop.

    That, and there's also some options in the material editor / world options that you might want to play with like Modulate-Better etc...If I remember correctly that helps out with the shadows in between grass blades etc. Not sure if that'll help your situation but you can give it a shot.
  • RexM
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    Depends on the engine's alpha rendering capabilities.

    Most engines read alphas as hard-edged, no matter how smooth you make the edges appear in a paint program.

    The engines that do have alpha smoothing don't require smooth-edged alphas either, they just have different alpha rendering techniques.

    The only way to get softer edges would be through the shader nodes for that material in UDK in this case.
  • Sythen
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    Sythen polycounter lvl 10
    Continuously working on this environment, Doors are modeled, unwrapped but not textured. And the top pillars around the walls for extra height along with the pillars over the doors are finished.

    SH14.jpg
    SH15.jpg
    SH16.jpg

    C&C! =D

    - Scott 'Sythen' Baker.
  • Nemlet17
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    Thanks everyone for he suggestions but still am having no luck. Is there a way in matinee so when the camera is moving it produces motion blur. This is the only way I can think of "solving" the hard edges. and at least make them look decent.

    Zack Dembinski
  • ayoub44
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    Sythen : look great , the only crits i have is on the fence .. work more on the texture ; so that fence a spec map yet ?

    good luck
  • plyrs
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    Sythen - your fence needs some alpha map love.

    I got my ceiling working and some debris from said ceiling on the floor.
    schoolgate_ceiling.jpgschoolgate_7.jpg
  • passerby
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    passerby polycounter lvl 12
    plyrs wrote: »
    Sythen - your fence needs some alpha map love.

    I got my ceiling working and some debris from said ceiling on the floor.
    schoolgate_ceiling.jpgschoolgate_7.jpg

    you just using a bump offset on the different rings on the floor, or do you got a plane above it.
  • adam
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    adam polycounter lvl 19
    Can I join? What do I have to do?
  • adam
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    adam polycounter lvl 19
    And is there scheduled voice chat for this group?
  • adam
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    adam polycounter lvl 19
    And just to clarify my intentions: I'm not so sure I would post my own artwork in here as I would jsut like to join the chats/voice chats as I work. I find talking about art while making art to be enjoyable :D
  • BadgerBaiter
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    @Scott... it may be just me, but those double doors looks slightly too wide...just looks a bit off IMHO :) Looking lovely apart from that :p
  • trancerobot
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    plyrs wrote: »
    Sythen - your fence needs some alpha map love.

    I got my ceiling working and some debris from said ceiling on the floor.
    schoolgate_ceiling.jpgschoolgate_7.jpg

    I'm not part of the study group, but I'd like to mention that your ceiling is very odd for a classroom. It looks like tiles glued onto a very low concrete slab, which is very weird - I've never seen any class like that, and it leads me to wonder where the light fixtures would go (update: well I suppose they'd work like this). There is usually a space between the ceiling you see and the actual structural ceiling. I forget what they call it, but you've seen it. It's not a crawl space exactly, but utilities often run through there. Here's an example.

    An acceptable quick fix could be if the partially tiled concrete ceiling you have were higher, with exposed pipes, vents, and light fixtures suspended below. Like this.
  • passerby
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    passerby polycounter lvl 12
    @trancerobot

    floating ceiling is the word your looking for, used for everything from air circulation to a place to run pipes and cabling un-seen. makes it easier to get lighting put in to.
  • Sythen
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    Sythen polycounter lvl 10
    Thanks for the crits guys, working on resizing the doors as we speak. As for the alpha love. Alpha's never been my strong point. Anyone want to give suggestions or even mini-tutorials on how I can improve my failing alpha maps on my fences? =D
  • plyrs
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    passerby - I have them on planes.

    trancerbot - this is supposed to be an older school. I'm using reference from an abandoned school damaged by a fire. Here you can see the ceiling is indeed made up of tiled attached to a concrete ceiling. More modern schools use the drop ceilings you mentioned.
    0000002769.jpg
  • holyjewsus
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    These look like asbestos tiles attached to a concrete 1 way slab (it has concrete beams cast into it)
  • plyrs
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    I'm willing to change to a drop ceiling later. I did a quick test of what that might look like (i.e raising the concrete slap out of sight) and it looked good. For now though I'm going to just keep working on more stuff that isn't done yet. A lot of adjustment needs to be done after all the assets are created to make this as good as it can be.
  • Sythen
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    Sythen polycounter lvl 10
    @plyrs: The lighting through the window looks beautiful, maybe perhaps increase the lightmap on the wall with the chalkboard, looks a little broken up. It might be worth it!

    Any tips with the Alpha love? I really need nail a better texture on the alphas of that fence.
  • trancerobot
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    plyrs wrote: »
    passerby - I have them on planes.

    trancerbot - this is supposed to be an older school. I'm using reference from an abandoned school damaged by a fire. Here you can see the ceiling is indeed made up of tiled attached to a concrete ceiling. More modern schools use the drop ceilings you mentioned.

    Yeah, I was starting to realize that. Still, it could still work and I doubt many people would think about it.
    passerby wrote: »
    @trancerobot

    floating ceiling is the word your looking for, used for everything from air circulation to a place to run pipes and cabling un-seen. makes it easier to get lighting put in to.


    Yeah, that's the word.
  • plyrs
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    Sythen wrote: »
    @plyrs: The lighting through the window looks beautiful, maybe perhaps increase the lightmap on the wall with the chalkboard, looks a little broken up. It might be worth it!

    That jaggy shadow is being cast by the plants in the window. If you look at the other window's shadow on the board it is really smooth. The last thing, this is quick lighting. I haven't actually done a 'production quality' lighting build yet.
  • aajohnny
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    aajohnny polycounter lvl 13
    Continuing my dungeon room

    withcoffin-2.jpg
  • Oniram
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    Oniram polycounter lvl 17
    lookin pretty cool so far johnny. it actually looks a bit more like a krypt than a dungeon. but it still would be pretty cool to see some hanging chains and blood stains. :D
  • aajohnny
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    aajohnny polycounter lvl 13
    Thanks, haha I guess that'll work! i'll add some of that stuff
  • Perfectblue
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    Blockout of a harrier. Thoughts?
    harrier_blockout-1.png


    Also steam group is up message me on steam for an invite Perfectblue. http://steamcommunity.com/groups/PolyCount_StudyGroup
  • sneakymcfox
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    Ignore that i'm an idiot
  • myles
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    Been working on my ancients scene a little more this weekend, seems like its going on for ever! I'll post crits later tonight, im just about to head out :)
    screenshot2011061314351.jpg
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