@VeryCrunchyTaco I think if you'd made your character thicker and more harsh it would improve your work. Beard could be smaller.
Also IMO there's something with his back which is not appealing to viewer's eye. In terms of composition, I guess. I'd try to move triangle somewhere else, or make 2 straps like in front.
@Harford Next one will be up tomorrow! It will go from February to the end of March. I have a theme for the next one, but if you guys have any themes you would like to see in the future, please let me know!@omar_0007 A new one will be up tomorrow, so in a way you are early
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