Cheeks need to be higher, eyebrows pinched closer, more wrinkles at the top of the nose... Make an angry face and feel which muscles are being moved on your face.
More work. I adjusted the the shoulder plates with a new base mesh, pinched the edges of the skirt, added in the sword, and did some more stuff to the fibermesh hair
Figured I'd whip this one out since I've been promising it for a while. Makes skin variations a snap in a pinch. Lemme know what you think. http://www.poopinmymouth.com/tutorial/gradient_map.htm