@ pixelpatron - Thank you for the continued feedback and yeah... What you said about lighting... It's probably been the hardest part of this project for me because it's just been blocking considering the whole thing being "finished" and it's an area that I'm just not comfortable with (working on it though!). The god rays…
Yea the fog is too much. You could add a static cube surrounding the building and add a volumetric material to it. It will tank your performance but will look much better
This one is different. And that's what makes it so fucking cool. The book is popular because of that, it tries to explain what actually happened and why dudes with tanks failed worldwide.
I think some of your lines could be straighter with closer attention to perspective. I did a quick mockup of the gas tank (?) to show if it's leaning forwards or backwards.