Feedback Needed Please

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  EricElwell insane polycounter

  Nov 2017

  The character looks like it is falling over. Check the relationship between the knees, feet, & hip tilt. You could also drop a plum line from the neck to the floor to see where your weight needs to be distributed. 

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  JordanN interpolator

  Nov 2017

  I think some of your lines could be straighter with closer attention to perspective. 
  
  I did a quick mockup of the gas tank (?) to show if it's leaning forwards or backwards. 
  
  
  

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