Awesome substance!My only comment is that the missing bricks, where there are brick shaped gaps of mortar looks a little weird. You may well have actual reference showing this but the idea of A) bricks falling out of the wall and not exposing a massive hole in the wall, or B) the wall being constructed intentionally with…
ok, well now instead of adding all the corner bricks you only added a few...take a look at the concept...those corner bricks are very well designed, and imo help out immensly as part of the design of the building...dont sparatically add those corner bricks... they are down the whole building. and also, they are not exactly…
Looking good, i like your colours :) . If you still are looking for some crit, (or just some advice for future projects) I'd say the placement of the 'features' of the building is off in relation to the brickwork. The height/width of window frames/doors is usually dictated by human proportions (ie a modern doorframe is…
Nate id go with more of something that looks like that ref of yours. Look at how the brick is used, its all hard edges with vertical and horizontal elements. Note that it doesn't do any of the things you have your doing, because that not how brick works. Think more about how the bricks form a shape not a shape with brick…
Everything is looking very blocky and looks like it's built of BSP rather than models. You can afford to use a lot more polys to give everything a bit more character and silhouette. The windows, walls, the concrete step, they all look so square and hard edge. You should think of making your own brick texture. It looks very…
Looking mighty fine sir, On your brick tiling texture the top three rows are picture perfect. The forth row (Large bricks at the base of the tower.) The highlight/specular have very noticeable paint brush strokes. Which makes it look different compared to the top rows. The biggest thing that catches my eye is the two large…
Not a max user, but just figured I'd pop in to say that this is becoming a great resource for picking up some great tips and tricks for max! Keeep the knowledge flowing!
I think the blacks on those bricks are still way too dark & wide, it makes every single brick stand out too much and still causes a lot of visual noise. If you think of a human scale to those bricks, you would probably be able to stick your entire hand into all of those cracks. If you look at the paint over, the cracks are…
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