Materials don't look like real materials to me. Like sword hilt is super shiny and most armors' texture seem random. Do those armors have thickness ? Armor also seems to float above the character too much.
Good job on finishing the character! Some quick suggestions. Overall the anatomy is a bit distracting because of anatomical issues. Basically this part comes down to simply doing more characters like this and continuing to closely observe the human body as you go. Another area that sticks out is the thickness of the armor,…